Invisible Ink
A Practical Guide to Building Stories that Resonate
Invisible Ink - When Bad Things Happen to Good Stories - Page 118
When bad things happen to good stories
One day I was watching Close Encounters of the Third Kind and I realized that it had the wrong ending. Who am I to say this? I'm just a guy who looked at the clues and saw the grammatical errors in the dramatic structure.
First, let me say that I like Spielberg. More than a few of you, I'm sure, don't like his work. But he is a master storyteller and you should learn all you can from him and use those skills to tell the stories you want to tell.
In short, CE3K is about a man, played by Richard Dreyfuss, who sees a UFO one night and becomes obsessed with seeing it again. The UFO has planted an image in his brain, and he is driven to find out what this shape means.
He begins acting so strangely that his wife takes his kids and leaves him.
When he realizes that the image in his head is Devil's Tower, in Wyoming, he goes through hell and high water to get there.
I'm leaving out some details, but when he gets to Devil's Tower, he gets to see the UFOs and is invited to leave with the aliens. This is what he's wanted, so he leaps at the chance and boards the spaceship. It flies into the sky over the closing credits, taking Richard Dreyfuss away on a wondrous journey to parts unknown.
The End. This is the wrong ending.
Richard Dreyfuss has a wife and kids he's leaving behind. He didn't make a sacrifice. What he does is selfish. He has not grown from this experience at all.
There are even several clones in the film that tell you that Dreyfuss may be gone for decades. There are people returning to earth who have been missing for years. Where are their families now? Their lives will be disrupted forever. Yet Dreyfuss goes.
He even sees how upset one character is because her son was taken away from her, even for a short time.





